What is a good writing？
A good composition
What is a good writing？ Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
How to write a good composition？
1)Use proper linking words
使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words
Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. The reasons can be listed as follow. To begin with most families are too poor ____________, to send their children to school. __________, As a result they have no choice but to stay at home and make money.
as a result; To begin with ;
In addition ; However
In addition __________, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. Therefore, they don’t let them go to school. Finally _______, some children are not interested in their studies. ______________________, To make matters worse some wouldn’t like to go to school. In my opinion; Finally ; To make matters worse ; In addition
As far as I’m concerned, all the children including girls should be educated. _______, Besides the whole society should put great emphasis on children’s education ________ they’ll because play an important part in the future of our country one day.
besides; However ; because ; Therefore
Good beginning and ending 1)As far as ...is concerned 就…而言 2)Many people insist that... ／hold the opinion that 很多人坚持认为..
3)Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...
4)From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….
Avoid Chinglish! heavy. 1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. is 2) There has a highway connected with Beijing. 3) Though the transport is good ，but it fades next to our natural resources. left 4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will take us much money to buy one. cost
It built in the 1980s. was ∧ In our city ,the public order is better than∧ other places. that of Buy a cellphone is too expensive. Buying The public order is very well. good At the last ，I hope you can invest here. \
to Thank you for you come. your coming I think you can happy. be
Let me introduce this city for you. To my surprised, my father agreed to buy one.
1. I’m very happy I can write letter to you. a ∧ interested 2. Some are not interest in lessons.
3. I think every child is equality.
4. Because of their parents don’t have enough money .
5. I can keep∧ touch with my family. in 6. Some parents think go to school is not good. going 7. Every child including girls should have the chance to accept education. receive 8. There are many families are poor. 9. Some parents in ∧ village think that girls are not important as well as boys. the
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式 1. When he arrived, he gave me an e-mail immediately. (使用V-ing形式)
When arriving _____________, he gave me an e-mail immediately.
/On his arrival,
2. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (过去分词)
Once seen __________,it can never be forgotten.
3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句)
What surprises him is that _____________________the little girl knows so many things.
4. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态)
It is suggested that ________________the conference be put off.
5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型)
It was not until _____________he had read the news in the that newspaper _____ he knew what had happened.
6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）
I couldn’t have passed ___________________the physics exam
but for ________your help.
7. I won’t believe what he says. (使用状语 从句)
No matter what ______________he says, I won’t believe. Whatever
8. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定语从句)
whose composition was well written The girl_____________________________ is spoken highly of.
9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
Study hard, and you’ll ___________________make rapid progress.
10. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
No sooner had ______________he come back from Beijing than ______he was sent abroad.
Hardly …. when..
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项目 自评 他评 1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划? 2.句子开头注意大小写了吗? 3.有没有注意标点符号? 4将文章分段了吗?分成了几段? 5有单词拼写错误吗?几个? 6.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态? 7.注意主谓一致了吗? 8.有没有语态的错误? 9.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗? 10.有没有词性的错误?哪一种? 11.简单句表达正确吗? 12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构? 13.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗? 14.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些?
A good composition *Good beginning and ending * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No spelling and grammatical mistakes * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
一：高中英语中表层次的连接词 first, firstly, first of all ,to begin with,
to start with , in the first place
second, secondly, what is more, besides ,in addition, furthermore ; moreover ,on the other hand,
finally ,eventually, last, last but not least
therefore thus hence consequently since as because because of on account of as a result / consequence of due to owing to thanks to
表示转折： however, but, nevertheless,
after all ,on the contrary on the other hand