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高中英语写作讲评

homework show The computer is more and more widely used. Young people like to chat on line. When they are chatting, they don’t care about their writing . There have many

wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework. They can’t remember the characters. How do you grade out a new policy. It it(定档)? The government has carried will make people And why?to Chinese. It will pay attention help students learn Chinese well. We don’t have much time. It’s high time that we took action. We can develop our country by improving our mother tongue first.

Let’s improve it:
ASSESSMENT

structure

content

Is the article divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence? If not, come up with one. Are all the details stated? If not, add the missing details.
Is everything to the point(切题)? Does the writer use any linking words?

Language

Are there any mistakes? If yes, correct them. Is there any advanced vocabulary(高级词汇)? If yes, underline them. Are there any good sentence patterns(句式)? If yes, underline them.

Let’s improve it:

ASSESSMENT structure Is the article divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence? If not, come up with one.

Let’s improve it:

content

Are all the details stated? If not, add the missing details. Is everything to the point(切题)?

Let’s improve it:

Does the writer use any linking words? Language Are there any mistakes? If yes, correct them. Is there any advanced vocabulary(高级词汇)? If yes, underline them. Are there any good sentence patterns(句式)? If yes, underline them.

Summary:
paragraphs structure

topic sentence
details

writing

content to the point linking words few mistakes

language

advanced vocabulary

sentence patterns

目前,不少年轻人在写作中喜欢使用网络语言。某英语杂志社就此话 题邀请中学生发表看法。请你参考所给要点,写一篇英语短文。

有的同学认为:幽默;时尚;好玩 有的同学认为:有错别字,不利于语文学习;有时难以理解 你的看法:… …

Improve the composition. Nowadays, many teenagers like to use the Focus on web language in their writing. Some students think it is humorous and cool. They use the web topic sentences, language. They feel it’s fun. Some think it is difficult. They cannot advanced vocabulary & patterns understand. When they are chatting on line, and about their writing. There have they don’t carelinking words.
some wrongly-written characters. It is bad for Chinese learning. I think we can use the web language and we can express ourselves more freely.

You cannot teach a man anything; you can only help him find it within himself. --- Galileo Galilei

Homework

Further improve the writing according to the assessment form. Make your final copy as neat as possible.

Let’s divide it into parts:
Part.1

The computer … remember the characters. The government … help students learn Chinese well. It’s high time that we … by improving our mother tongue first.

Part.2

Part.3

Come up with the topic sentences: A topic sentence tells the reader what a certain part is about. Part 1: It is common that there are many wrongly-written characters in a student’s composition.

Part 2: To deal with the situation, the government carry out a new policy.
Part 3: As far as I am concerned, it’s high time that we took action.

Topic sentence for Part 1
computer homework Topic sentence for Part 2 raise the awareness of have a positive effect on Topic sentence for Part 3 …

Which ending do you like best? Why?

a)In my opinion, the policy is beneficial to us. It makes sense in protecting our culture. b) As far as I am concerned, it’s high time that we took action. We should collect the mistakes and review them frequently. Only by hard working can we achieve our goal.

… they don’t care about their writing .

writing

are There have many wrong characters in
their compositions, too. Every day, they
have many homework.

much

A C …________. ________, when young people chat online, D they attach little importance to their writing. __________, with so much homework to do, they have trouble memorizing the characters. The new policy is intended to deal with the situation. Raising the social awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning. __________, it’s high time that we took action. B E __________, we should refer to a dictionary for unknown characters. Second, collect the mistakes and review them frequently. In a word, only by working hard can we achieve our goal. A.There are several reasons behind. B. As far as I am concerned C. For example D. Moreover. E. First of all

Can you improve them? ①When they are chatting, they don’t care their writing. ②Every day, they have much homework. They are too busy to remember the characters. ③It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue. It will help students learn Chinese well.

When they are chatting, they don’t care their writing.
(Ellipsis 省略句)

When chatting, they don’t care their writing.

Every day, they have much homework. They can’t remember the characters.
(so…that; fail to do)

They have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters.
with With so much homework to do, they have trouble in remembering the characters.

It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue. raise the awareness of It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue.

It will help students learn Chinese well. have a positive effect on It will have a positive effect on students’ Chinese learning.

It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue. It will have a positive effect on students’ Chinese learning. (not only…but also)
It will not only raise the awareness of our mother tongue, but also have a positive effect on students’ Chinese learning. (non-verbal非谓语) Raising _______the awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning.

It is common that there are many wrongly-written characters in a student’s composition. There are several reasons behind. For example, when chatting on line, teenagers attach little importance to their writing. Moreover, with so much homework to do, they have trouble memorizing the characters. To deal with the situation, the government carry out a new policy. Raising the social awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning. As far as I am concerned, it’s high time that we took action. We should collect the mistakes and review them frequently. In a word, only by working hard can we achieve our goal.

Thank you


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