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高中英语写作公开课-话题作文(过程写作)


Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

Two heads are better than one.
Practice makes perfect.

Fixed phrases
do harm to; fix one’s attention on; prefer A to B; take action


Effective linking words
First of all; Besides; However; In in all, Apart from …

Complicated grammar patterns
非谓语动词作状 语; 名词性从句; 状语从句; 倒装句; …

1. 认真审题,把握主题
2. 抓准要点,勾勒题纲

3. 紧扣要点,扩写成句
4. 添加过渡,确保连贯 5. 修饰文章,提升层次 6. 查错补漏,工整抄写

1. 认真审题,把握主题
最近的一项调查表明,大约有40%的学生没有吃早餐的习 惯。请你说明此现象发生的原因,并就此发表个人看法, 提出相关建议。 注意:1. 词数:120左右 2. 题目已经给出,词数不计入总数。 Top Meal of the Day

1. 体裁: 议论文 2. 时态: 一般现在时 3. 主题: 中学生不吃早饭现象的原因及评论

2. 抓准要点,勾勒题纲
Phenomenon: 40% percent of the students don’t have
breakfast.

Reasons:

study late; have no appetite for breakfast; want to lose weight; …

Comments:

provide 30 percent of energy; students will feel sick and sleepy; have breakfast every morning; …

2. 抓准要点,勾勒题纲 3. 紧扣要点,扩写成句
Phenomenon:
?A recent study shows… ?According to the recent survey,… 40% percent of students don’t have ?Recently, a survey has carried out, breakfast. showing that…

?There are several reasons accounting study late; for this phenomenon. ?Ahave no appetite for breakfast; number of factors account for/lead to/ Reasons: want to lose weight; contribute to/result in this phenomenon. … ?The reasons for this phenomenon are obvious. provide point of view,… ?From my 30 percent of energy; students will feel sick and Comments: ?As far as I’m concerned,… sleepy; have breakfast every morning; ?Concerning this issue, I think… …

4. 添加过渡,确保连贯
?A recent study shows… don’t have 40% percent of students Phenomenon: ?According to the recent survey,… breakfast.
?There are several reasons accounting study late; for this phenomenon. have no appetite for breakfast; ?A number of factors account for/lead to/ want to lose weight; in this phenomenon. contribute to/result … ?… ?From my point of view,… provide 30 percent of energy; ?As far as will feel sick and sleepy; students I’m concerned,… ?Concerning this issue, I think… have breakfast every morning; …

Reasons:

Comments:

some students…; others…. In addition,…. As a matter of fact; Consequently,… …so that…; Besides;

5. 修饰文章,提升层次 1. 单词变短语
The morning meal is important. The morning meal, the morning meal plays an important part / is of great importance.

2. 简单句变复合句
Some students study late into the night. They have no time to have breakfast.
Some students who study late into the night choose to skip breakfast.

3. 肯定变否定
Some girls skip breakfast to lose weight. For girls, having no breakfast is definitely not a wise to lose weight.

4. 主动变被动
Some parents give money to their children to buy breakfast on the way to school. Some students are given money to buy breakfast on the way to school.

6. 查错补漏,工整抄写

检查:时态语态、单词拼写、大小写、冠词、
句子结构(句子无主语、主谓一致…)

书写工整,卷面整洁!

Good handwriting also counts!


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