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English Composition Writing

[写作内容] 1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。 2. 以约120词就“制定规划与达成目标”这一主题 进行议论,内容包括: (1) 海狸修水坝的故事给你的启示是什么? (2) 请结合你的生活经历阐述“制定规划与达成目 标”之间的关系。 [写作要求] 1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事.也可以 参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句 子。 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯

Beavers are very diligent dambuilders who can build extremely good dams. However, they sometimes don’t know where to build the dams or which dams should be fixed only because they have no consciousness to make a plan. The beavers’ story illustrates the importance of planning. Without a plan the best intentions and efforts will not produce results. We shouldn’t work blindly but have a clear idea of our purpose, the actions needed to achieve it, and how these should be ordered.

As a junior student, I achieved considerable success in learning English through the combination of hard work and planning. I prepared good materials with the help of my teacher, made plans for my daily study and self-monitored the whole process of my learning. I made rapid progress and became very confident. I think I couldn’t have done it without a good plan.

Diligence is a key to success, but in my opinion, good plan is also essential. Through planning, we can develop clear goals, find more efficient and effective methods and thus have more opportunities to reach our goals than through hardworking alone.

The Essay Appreciate and learn the three well organized compositions from students


What makes a good essay?

Everything needed included which is related to your view. (内容要完整)

*Good beginning and ending (好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) * Proper linking words between sentences

使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words
1. Based on this passage,as far as I am concerned ____________________, making a plan before doing something is essential. On the contrary 2. ____________, we’ll complete our goal with a reasonable plan. As a consequence 3. ___________________________ it’s important to have a plan. as far as I am concerned on the contrary as a consequence

4. As an old saying goes, “no pains, no

gains”, _____________________, I think, only by taking however pains to complete our goals with a plan, can we attain success. Since then 5._________________, I have realized the vital importance of a strong plan.


Since then

* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)

Adopt a variety of sentence patterns

1. Based on this passage, as far as I am concerned, making a plan before doing
Something is essential.

2. Without a detailed plan, I couldn’t even allocate my time sensible, making me idle away the entire vocation

Adopt a variety of sentence patterns

3.For my part, I think that a detailed plan is to a person what a lighthouse is to a ship. 4.In a word, being a student, we should learn a rule, that is, a plan of vital importance for us to achieve success.

Adopt a variety of sentence patterns

5. Although beavers are always the symbol of working hard, their unplanned working are always useless, leading to the waste of both their time and superb ability.
6. Therefore, the confinement to success lies not only in one’s capacity for substantial actions, but also in one’s advanced planning

Please learn to

Your composition

项目 1.书写工整吗?有没有乱涂乱划? 2.句子开头注意大小写了吗? 3.有没有注意标点符号? 4将文章分段了吗?分成了几段? 5有单词拼写错误吗?几个? 6.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态? 7.注意主谓一致了吗? 8.有没有语态的错误? 9.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗? 10.有没有词性的错误?哪一种? 11.简单句表达正确吗? 12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构? 13.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配 了吗? 14.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些? 自评 他评



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