学霸学习网 这下你爽了
当前位置:首页 >> 英语 >>


Learn to Write
Views on social phenomenon
Gu Hongying from SFLS

What is the ice bucket challenge?
? The ice bucket challenge is an activity involving dumping a bucket of ice water on someone’s head to promote awareness of disease ALS and encourage donations to research.

My views on

the ice bucket challenge

What makes a good essay?
? ? ? ? ? Clean in handwriting Coherent in structure Complete in content Correct in language Clear in opinion

Sharing time
? Comment on each other’s essays. ? Underline highlights in each essay. ? Choose the best essay to present.

A good essay
Organization Content Language

Learn to polish your language
? ? ? ? ? Advanced words and expressions Brief topic sentences Correct linking words Diverse sentence patterns Effective participles

? Recently, the ice bucket challenge has sparked a heated debate. Some are for it, while others are against it. From my perspective, I am totally in favor of this unique charity campaign with the following reasons. ? Firstly, it raises individuals’ awareness of ALS patients. With attractive and amusing videos posted by celebrities in different fields, a growing number of netizens begin to focus on the tribe of patients. Meanwhile, by accepting the challenge and donating money, celebrities exert a positive influence on common people. Admittedly, it’s the star effect that counts. ? Secondly, easy access to feeling the pain from ALS patients push participants inclined to give them a helping hand. Soaked in ice water, they may directly experience the process of being frozen. ? Last but not least, I deem, the most effective, is the nominating rule. Three more friends nominated, the charity triples, creating a prevalent and loving circulation where more and more people get involved. ? In a word, the widespread from celebrities to the public, the experience of being frozen as well as the loving circulation, all contribute to such a conducive activity.

? 最近的新闻中常有女大学生在返校途中 被害的报道,女大学生的安全问题令人 堪忧。为何女大学生屡遭侵害,请发表 你的看法。 ? 题目:My views on girl students’ security

For English composition,at first I thought the most important things are all these fancy words and complicated sentences.Then I began to found that the logical points and clear structure seem also indispensable.But finally,I get to know when it comes to a composition,no matter English or Chinese,what count are actually not the outer things but the one deeply inside.More specifically,they are your unique opinions,your comprehensive and exact advice and your sincere emotions.And from my point of view,to achieve these,one has to think more of the small daily things that he/she did,saw,heard,read and experienced.So try to put your reasonable and fresh ideas into the composition to make it impressive and contagious,and maybe one day you’ll find that you have made a big step on your English learning.



高中英语必修五课件_英语_高中教育_教育专区。高中英语必修五Unit1 ...上为期一周的专业课,提高你的写作技能。 likely 【原句回放】Older teenagers ...


高考英语基础写作单句训练 - 优质课课件,优质课教学设计,中国青年教师,素养大赛一等奖,期末测试及答案,单元检测及答案


看—说—写, 听—说—写;利用多媒体课件,优化作文讲评方式等措施,有效提高学生英语写作水平,旨在摸索出一条适合高中学生交际需求和认知发展水平的英语写作教学新...


教学难点:英语作文的写作方法 3、教具准备: 多媒体课件、资料、练习册。 4、教学方式:任务型教学法,讨论法,寓教于乐游戏教学法。 二、说学习者:高三学生虽然...


高考英语书面表达专题讲座1——三段式作文法_高中作文_高中教育_教育专区。优质课课件,优质课教学设计,中国青年教师,素养大赛一等奖,期末测试及答案,单元检测及答案 ...


苏教版高一英语家教课件_英语_高中教育_教育专区。高一英语试题整理 21. I’m...Lights and Heaters in the Year 2040 写作: 假设你叫刘爱华,你的英国笔友 ...

人教版高一英语第一课good friends 课件

人教版高一英语第一课good friends 课件高一英语教案 教师:黄丽燕 日期:2011-...《友谊地久天长》是 一首非常出名的诗歌,原文用苏格兰语写作,意思是逝去已久的...


高中英语应用文写作_英语_高中教育_教育专区。1.投诉信(抱怨信)(Letter of Complaint) (1) 写作方法 ① 首段:注意客观礼貌 a.自我介绍; b.引出投诉内容 c....


人教版高一英语第一课good_friends_课件_英语_高中教育_教育专区。人教版高英语...《友谊地久天长》是 一首非常出名的诗歌,原文用苏格兰语写作,意思是逝去已久的...

模块四Unit 1 Reading 2课件

模块四Unit 1 Reading 2课件_英语_高中教育_教育专区。课件 牛津高中英语教学...语境中巩固记忆文章中的短语和习惯用法, 并有助于培养语感,有助于写作能力的...

网站首页 | 网站地图
All rights reserved Powered by 学霸学习网
copyright ©right 2010-2021。